Today we read and discussed, “Ode to the Lizard” by Pablo
Neruda and worked on writing our own ode poems. For your blog homework tonight
you will write another ode poem.
Remember, an ode is a poem meant to praise and describe
something in detail.
Choose an ordinary object to write an ode about (such as a
pencil, trash can, fire hydrant, apple, etc.) Be sure to use figurative
language in your ode. Remember figurative language includes simile, metaphor,
vivid imagery, etc.
O apple
ReplyDeleteYour a healthy good snack.
O apple how sweet and juicy you are.
O apple without you the world wouldn’t have a good sweet fruit.
O apple your a good snack.
Ode To Pencil
ReplyDeleteOde to pencil, you help me with school
Ode to pencil, you are as hard as a stone
Ode to pencil, you are as quiet as the wind
Ode to pencil, you help me write
Ode to pencil, you help me think
Ode to pencil, you will never leave me
Ode to pencil, you help me with homework
Ode to pencil, you’ll never leave
Great idea writing about a pencil.
DeleteOde to a Summer Day
ReplyDeleteThe strong smell of chlorine is in my nose
the light reflects off the water
white tiles seem to shift
hot air is still and dry
I don't need to go anywhere
I don't need to do anything.
Ode cat
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so fufly like pillow
ode cat
you make me so happy when i see you
ode cat
you live so long
you eye are so cool
ode cat
cat I wish I could have you for ever
Ode apple
ReplyDeleteso nice
ode apple
hard to eat but looks so sweet.
ode apple
so healthy like me
ode apple
a very good snack
ode apple
I can't survive without you.
Ode To Beans
ReplyDeleteO beans
your so very yummy
The only person who would reject you is a dummy
O beans
I taste you with rice and its ever so nice
O beans
your like a angel that came down from bean heaven
On a scale from one to ten your an eleven
this is my tipe of poem
DeleteOde to pillow
ReplyDeleteO pillow
you give me good sleep
O pillow
Your so soft
O pillow
you give me good dreams
O pillow O pillow
I enjoy my slumber with you
I love it !!! I love my pillow a lot too (:
Deleteit is so funny
DeleteO Drax the way your scales rubs on my hands,
ReplyDeleteO Drax how we play when I feed you,
O Drax when I scratch your spiky beard,
O Drax your colors reminds me of the beach,
O Drax the way the sand sounds when you rub your tail on it,
O Drax the way you smile at me cheers me up when I’m down,
O Drax when you lay on my shoulder it makes me feel loved,
O Drax, how I love you to the max.
who is drax
DeleteOde to Ice cream O Ice cream you are yummy to lick O Ice cream you are so tasty O Ice cream I have so many flavors that I can't choose O Ice cream I will never forget you
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ReplyDeleteOde to a kiwi
O kiwi, o pear, I love thee
O kiwi, o pear, your sweet and green
O kiwi, o pear I love to eat thee
O kiwi, o pear, your so tasty
O kiwi, o pear, you taste good me
O kiwi, o pear, I love the
Ode to the Lion
ReplyDeleteO Lions how your brownish gold fur burns my sadness away
your roar makes the world bow down and rejoice
your thick mane scares off the cruelness of this earth for you make thy day of mine so much better when you smile
for we must treat you better
thank you Lions.
Ode to turtle
ReplyDeleteO turtle,I love thee
O turtle, your like a rock with legs
O turtle, you swim so gently
O turtle, you have nice patterns on your back
O turtle, you hide when danger is near
O turtle,O turtle, I love thee.
ode to the ocean
ReplyDeletethe ocean swave hit a rock close to the shore
the blue cool water tickles your toes
the great big ocean is a potion of motion
an under water universe
a great big fish bowl
more mysterious than the eye can see or the mind can think
ocean is a lotion to things in motion
Ode to pencil
ReplyDeleteOh pencil, oh pencil
I do think of thee
You get out my feelings through your pointed tip
Oh pencil, oh pencil
The different worlds I can make with your graphite line
Oh pencil, oh pencil
I do think of thee
Thine eraser lets me erase things I didn't mean to do
Pencil, oh pencil
I do thank thee.
By the way I didn't copy Olive, I just decided to do an ode to a pencil and she happened to do an ode to a pencil as well. It's just a coincidence.
O'Track, I heaven thee; When I run I run so quickly! O'Track, I heaven thee, When I run I get lots of energy! O'Track, I heaven thee, When I race no one can beat me! O'Track I heaven thee, When I start I don't stop easily! O' Track, I heaven thee, When I race I feel like I'm in the sea!
ReplyDeleteO love, o love, how beautiful you are. Your the thing that brings people together.
ReplyDeleteO love, o love, you fill people's hearts with joy and happiness.You share your love and laughter with us.
O love, o love, without you the world would be a mean and sad place. Without you there their would be no laughter, joy or happiness in the world.
O love, o love, I love you so dearly. Thank you for bringing joy, laughter and happiness to my heart.
O love, o love, I accipate you so dearly.
O mom how much I love you, without you I wouldn't be me.
ReplyDeleteO mom if it wasn't for you I wouldn't be here writing this poem, you make sure I have what I need and what I want.
O mom, you make sure I have a roof over my head, you made sure that I had a sister.
O mom, you bring joy to my face whenever I see you, if you think I'm upset you will make sure if I am or not.
O mom, you always make me feel ok, when I'm with you I feel like I'm protected.
O mom I LOVE YOU SO DEARLY.
O Soccer
ReplyDeleteWhen I kick I feel exhilaration
When I back heel I feel good
O Soccer
When I see the ball soaring through the air I care
O soccer I love how I juggle around fast like a hound
O soccer
O pencils
ReplyDeleteI need you to write
You write so smoothly
O pencils
I need you to write
Without you I don't know what I'd do
O pencils
I need you to write
When you break I get sad
O pencils
I need you to write
The sound of you sharpening makes me happy
O pencils
I need you to write
You are the best and you always will be
Ode to a pencil
ReplyDeleteWithout a pencil
I wouldn't be able to write
I wouldn't be able to write all my cool awesome ideas
There would be no reading
No excitement!
No one would know about history
Without a pencil you can't write down how amazing your day was
Ode to dad
ReplyDeleteYou are the best
You try your best
You calm me down
You take care of me
You are great
You are the best
You try your best
I love you
I know you love me
Pencil
ReplyDeleteO pencil
You help me write
You help me draw
You help me erase
When I made a mistake
Scribble scrabble
My writing is done
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ReplyDeletehello 4th grade class. Really nice responses,you will all get to be as cool as me one day. :)
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