You need to write about your life. My poetic devices are simile, metaphor and rhyme.
color: Black is like the sky at the night black is like the underworld black smells like flowers black looks like dark places black makes me think about myself is the dark side of anything.
My poem is free verse. I used metaphor and simile.
I learned that poems are beautiful. I also learned that if you put a lot of thinking into it that it could change a person and how they see the subject that you wrote about. the poetic device i mostly use is rhyme. one of the poems i wrote is: Me This is a poem about me a boy growing day by day like a tree when i am in my mind i feel free when i go outside i don’t look like anyone else because i am me i don’t need a car because i can go as far as i can see i don’t want chains because i want to be free like a bird flying in the sky minding me i have the power to open door so please throw the key in the trash and let it be The poetic device i used was rhyme.
Carmelo is a science fellow , whose favorite color is yellow who eats jello, also is known as the big fat marshmallow , plays a Cello because his teeth are yellow , he is very mellow , that's what makes him the science fellow, and when you pass this special fellow remember to say "hello"!
Sorry, I meant WATER instead of BLUE. So it should like this: WATER cool,blue splashing,moving,flowing calm,colorful,dark,fierce blazing,destroying,warming red,hot FIRE
I have learned these past few weeks you can write about your lives. A poem that has a simile a metaphor and that rhyme's
MY favorite color:Blue is like the ocean blue is like the sky peaking through the clouds blue makes me feels calm blue is like spring and a blue blanket blue is as blue as a bright blue car blue is as blue as a pair of blue jeans blue is as blue as a pair of bright blue sneakers blue makes me feel like a summer day and blue sandals
Somethings I learned about poetry so far are the different types of poems and I also learned more poetic devices. For example assonance, onomatopoeia, lyric poetry, narrative, imagery, and personifcation. This is one of the poems I wrote... (COLOR POEM):
White is like a cold day. Wite is the Whip-cream on my hot chocolate. White is falling from the sky. White smels like Coconut Water. White taste like Vanilla falored ice cream. White sounds like a shaking paper. White feels like a soft breeze. White make me calm. White is a fustrated Chicken!
I think some of the poetic devices I used are, Simile, Metaphors, and Imagery.
I have used Odes, hyperbole, Haikus, sinquane and the color poem but that is not all. I am going to share a Haiku poem and its called Cherry Blossom so here it goes….
Light and delicate Pink but beautiful and strong Soft but elegant
When I'm making a poem the poetic devices I use are image and rhyme I use these poetic devices because its really easy for me to rhyme because I listen to a lot of music and the kind of music I listen to there is alot of rhyming.The reason I use image as a poetic device is because it's really easy for me to think of something to put in a poem and its even easier for me to have an image of something I don't like for a poem and it's the same for a poem I really do like and you will probably notice that once you read the poem down below.
Here is a poem I wrote:
Love is not that small Ode to my family
In your heart there is love. But there are two squares in your heart and one square has the love of all your friends but the other square is a whole different story. That square has the love of your family and you know it does because when you’re being loved by your family you feel the upright part of your heart pumping so hard. You also know when you’re being loved by your family because in your mouth it feels like your swallowing a giant piece of cheesecake. So if you thought love was some tiny little thing in your heart think again.
In that poem I use a lot of metaphors and similes because sometimes you can't share a feeling in a literal way so you can compare to something I also like to write list poems but some other poetic devices are onamonapia because I feel that it really helps imagine yourself in the poem I also use not a poetic device but sometimes it really helps to write about something you know about.
I have learned that I can use a Haiku, hyperbole, Ode, sinquane, assonance, and to write poems. I wrote a color poem. It’s about the color blue.
Blue is like the ocean Blue is like a sad feeling Blue is the sky Blue smells like blueberries Blue tastes like sour candy Blue sounds like a waterfall Blue looks like my jacket Blue feels like cold weather Blue makes me happy Blue is tears
Some poet devises that I used are simile and metaphore.
I am me. and that is who I want to be. I will change me when I want to to change me. NO ONE is me besides me, And I love that. Weird,energetic kid is the one and only because i know from inside , im always me and that will never change because, i'm me. And thats's final.
iv'e learned that poetry is a artsy way of writing to put your words on a piece of paper and also awesome. also anyone can write poem when they let their minds soar fluently.
Unicorns
ReplyDeleteUnicorns are magic.
they are pretty and beautiful.
they can fly very high.
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DeleteYou need to write about your life. My poetic devices are simile, metaphor and rhyme.
ReplyDeletecolor: Black is like the sky at the night black is like the underworld black smells like flowers black looks like dark places black makes me think about myself is the dark side of anything.
My poem is free verse. I used metaphor and simile.
In poetry I learned a lot of different kinds of poems and a lot of different poetic devices.I like to use imagery in my poems.
ReplyDeleteClouds
Drifting through the sky
Covering the sky in white
Watching them go by.
My poem is a Haiku poem.Haiku poems are from Japan.I used imagery in my poem.
I learned that poems are beautiful. I also learned that if you put a lot of thinking into it that it could change a person and how they see the subject that you wrote about. the poetic device i mostly use is rhyme. one of the poems i wrote is: Me
ReplyDeleteThis is a poem about me a boy growing day by day like a tree when i am in my mind i feel free when i go outside i don’t look like anyone else because i am me i don’t need a car because i can go as far as i can see i don’t want chains because i want to be free like a bird flying in the sky minding me i have the power to open door so please throw the key in the trash and let it be
The poetic device i used was rhyme.
The poetic device I choose was rhyming and humor.
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Carmelo is a science fellow , whose favorite color is yellow who eats jello, also is known as the big fat marshmallow , plays a Cello because his teeth are yellow , he is very mellow , that's what makes him the science fellow, and when you pass this special fellow remember to say "hello"!
By Joseph
Wow! I think your poem is very good. And I like how you added some humor!
DeleteI learned that there were so many different varieties of poems. One of my favorites is the color poem.
ReplyDeleteBLUE
cool,blue
splashing,moving,flowing
calm,colorful,dark,fierce
blazing,destroying,warming
red,hot
FIRE
This is a diamante poem. I used feelings for my poetic device.
sorry didn't come out as a diamond
Deletedont know why. STRANGE...
Deleteme to but it is good
DeleteSorry, I meant WATER instead of BLUE. So it should like this:
DeleteWATER
cool,blue
splashing,moving,flowing
calm,colorful,dark,fierce
blazing,destroying,warming
red,hot
FIRE
I have learned these past few weeks you can write about your lives. A poem that has a simile a metaphor and that rhyme's
ReplyDeleteMY favorite color:Blue is like the ocean blue is like the sky peaking through the clouds blue makes me feels calm blue is like spring and a blue blanket blue is as blue as a bright blue car blue is as blue as a pair of blue jeans blue is as blue as a pair of bright blue sneakers blue makes me feel like a summer day and blue sandals
by India bryant
My poem is a Haiku.They were originated in Japan and are about nature. The first sentence has 5 syllables and the second has 7, and the third has 5.
ReplyDeleteWinter is coming
The squirrel needs to get ready
It packs winter nuts.
Somethings I learned about poetry so far are the different types of poems and I also learned more poetic devices. For example assonance, onomatopoeia, lyric poetry, narrative, imagery, and personifcation. This is one of the poems I wrote... (COLOR POEM):
ReplyDeleteWhite is like a cold day.
Wite is the Whip-cream on my hot chocolate.
White is falling from the sky.
White smels like Coconut Water.
White taste like Vanilla falored ice cream.
White sounds like a shaking paper.
White feels like a soft breeze.
White make me calm.
White is a fustrated Chicken!
I think some of the poetic devices I used are, Simile, Metaphors, and Imagery.
that frustreaed chicken was hilarrous
Deletemy poetic device is imagery here is a haiku poem that i wrote
ReplyDeletedeer
prancing through the woods
hunting for his family
feeling like the wind
I've learned that poetry is a way express yourself.Also in some of the poems i write use imagery.
I have used Odes, hyperbole, Haikus, sinquane and the color poem but that is not all. I am going to share a Haiku poem and its called Cherry Blossom so here it goes….
ReplyDeleteLight and delicate
Pink but beautiful and strong
Soft but elegant
So that is one of my best poems.
The poetic devise I chose is the Haiku poem because it is my favorite poem out of all of them
ReplyDeleteSUMMER
It's a very hot day!
I forgot it's summer time
I like summer fun
poetry is a way to connect feelings and it takes over your imagination
When I'm making a poem the poetic devices I use are image and rhyme I use these poetic devices because its really easy for me to rhyme because I listen to a lot of music and the kind of music I listen to there is alot of rhyming.The reason I use image as a poetic device
ReplyDeleteis because it's really easy for me to think of something to put in a poem and its even easier for me to have an image of something I don't like for a poem and it's the same for a poem I really do like and you will probably notice that once you read the poem down below.
Here is a poem I wrote:
Love is not that small
Ode to my family
In your heart there is love.
But there are two squares in your
heart and one square has the love of all
your friends but the other square is a whole
different story. That square has the love of your family
and you know it does because when you’re being
loved by your family you feel the upright
part of your heart pumping so hard. You also
know when you’re being loved by your family
because in your mouth it feels like your swallowing
a giant piece of cheesecake. So if you thought love was some tiny little thing in your heart think again.
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ReplyDeleteAfter the dust reveals and clears away.
In that poem I use a lot of metaphors and similes because sometimes you can't share a feeling in a literal way so you can compare to something I also like to write list poems but some other poetic devices are onamonapia because I feel that it really helps imagine yourself in the poem I also use not a poetic device but sometimes it really helps to write about something you know about.
I have learned that poetry is beautiful and special in its own way. Poetry always sounds like music to me when I hear it. Here is one of my poems:
ReplyDeleteOh Pug, how I love you so.
Your big shiny eyes and
big squished face.
You feel like a soft blanket.
You have a curly, little, tail
and two small floppy ears.
Oh Pug, I know it's hard to
breathe because your face
is all mushed up. But I love
Pugs because of their flaws.
I will need a Pug as soon as can be.
I used rhyme, imagery and I think that's it.
i totally need a pug to lulu
DeleteI have learned that I can use a Haiku, hyperbole, Ode, sinquane, assonance, and to write poems. I wrote a color poem. It’s about the color blue.
ReplyDeleteBlue is like the ocean
Blue is like a sad feeling
Blue is the sky
Blue smells like blueberries
Blue tastes like sour candy
Blue sounds like a waterfall
Blue looks like my jacket
Blue feels like cold weather
Blue makes me happy
Blue is tears
Some poet devises that I used are simile and metaphore.
In this poem I used tone.
ReplyDeleteI am me.
and that is who I want to be.
I will change me when I want to to change me.
NO ONE is me besides me,
And I love that.
Weird,energetic kid is the one and only because i know from inside ,
im always me and that will never change because,
i'm me.
And thats's final.
iv'e learned that poetry is a artsy way of writing to put your words on a piece of paper and also awesome. also anyone can write poem when they let their minds soar fluently.
I learned poetry is a way to express your feelings. This is a pome based off a poem I did.
ReplyDeleteDon't you love the
lean green tree in
the blowing in the
Wind. Night or day.
I tried to give imagery in this poem. I also tried to rym. These are only two of the things that I love in poetry.